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~koe*no*sainou~
Two of the songs, "Is it me," and "Best part of the dream" were written Micheal Peterson. The rest are written by me and I'd also like to thank my very good friend Eddie who provided me with the beats happy.gif Hopefully one day I can make my own beats ._.

These are just 30 second samples jammed into one song btw...my voice isn't good enough to record full songs yet >.<

http://www.soundclick.com/lizhuhong
angel_cutie
=O i really like your voicee!!and your songss
x3wendy
i recognize a few of the beats you used & i l0ve those they're so addicting to listen to even without words <3
i also think you should complete your songs because they sound great so far.
Genesis
Great great. You're doing good so far.
Things you may wnat to focus on; Vibrato. You need to learn to bring out your vibrato more. You sound sometimes like your singing more from your throat than your gut.
So it becomes slightly thin. Your emotion is getting there as I go through the previews, which is awesome. You have a fabby fab tone, I can feel the potential. How about this, i'll trade a little of my excessive vibrato for your aweomse tone?? XD hahah.
Another thing, your previews sond slightly on the same... mmn, not sure how to explain in words exactly, just slightly similar. Maybe try switching yourself up just a bit more to add variety to your works.
Overall, keep doin watch you do. Let's all not stop our dreams and work hard. happy.gif
cheers~
PoPiNGal
you should record the songs full...your voice is sooooo good!!
aliks089
Some of the melodies you're singing clash with the beat you're singing on
(some of the beats aren't mixed very well, but thats not your fault)
The songs are cute, but it does sound like a young teen girl wrote them.

You aren't terrible at singing whatsoever - in fact you sound very pretty.
However, if this is what your going to dedicate yourself to be doing - i recommend getting vocal lessons to get down the technical stuff down at least
I feel thats what you're lacking
~koe*no*sainou~
QUOTE (angel_cutie @ Mar 24 2008, 10:17 PM) *
=O i really like your voicee!!and your songss


thankies ^ ^

QUOTE (x3wendy @ Mar 25 2008, 12:30 AM) *
i recognize a few of the beats you used & i l0ve those they're so addicting to listen to even without words <3
i also think you should complete your songs because they sound great so far.


thank youu, and yeah i don't really know wher the beats came from though cuz my friend usually sends them to me =/

QUOTE (Genesis @ Mar 25 2008, 12:43 AM) *
Great great. You're doing good so far.
Things you may wnat to focus on; Vibrato. You need to learn to bring out your vibrato more. You sound sometimes like your singing more from your throat than your gut.
So it becomes slightly thin. Your emotion is getting there as I go through the previews, which is awesome. You have a fabby fab tone, I can feel the potential. How about this, i'll trade a little of my excessive vibrato for your aweomse tone?? XD hahah.
Another thing, your previews sond slightly on the same... mmn, not sure how to explain in words exactly, just slightly similar. Maybe try switching yourself up just a bit more to add variety to your works.
Overall, keep doin watch you do. Let's all not stop our dreams and work hard. happy.gif
cheers~


hehe i read "you have a fobby tone" xD yeah i need vibratto ._____. it sucks cuz some people tell me to let it come naturally and some tell me i have to force it to develop it o.o it's like...make up your minds! > O but yeah, thank you mucho ^o^

QUOTE (PoPiNGal @ Mar 25 2008, 04:27 AM) *
you should record the songs full...your voice is sooooo good!!


hehe thanks ^ ^


QUOTE (aliks089 @ Mar 25 2008, 05:59 AM) *
Some of the melodies you're singing clash with the beat you're singing on
(some of the beats aren't mixed very well, but thats not your fault)
The songs are cute, but it does sound like a young teen girl wrote them.

You aren't terrible at singing whatsoever - in fact you sound very pretty.
However, if this is what your going to dedicate yourself to be doing - i recommend getting vocal lessons to get down the technical stuff down at least
I feel thats what you're lacking


hmm i don't quite understand what you mean by "clash." like...i'm just following the melody of the beat? o.o yeah i really want vocal lessons but my only problem is cash xD they usually cost like 70/hour. i tried online lessons too but i can't really be committed to those. it's always easier having someone there guiding you. but you're right, i'm lacking the technical stuff and the basic stuff needed to be a good singer =/ thanks for the c/c, i really appreciate it ^ ^
EverCool
you have a nice voice. but there is nothing special about it. you need to work on having a unique voice of your own. whether getting vocal lessons or whatever.

btw your songs are pretty good.
Krazim
Omigoodness, I love your voice. And your song samples are very nice. I really want to hear 'em someday in the future~! ^-^;;
~koe*no*sainou~
QUOTE (EverCool @ Mar 25 2008, 01:20 PM) *
you have a nice voice. but there is nothing special about it. you need to work on having a unique voice of your own. whether getting vocal lessons or whatever.

btw your songs are pretty good.


Yeah I know =/ But I feel like to have a unique voice you have to be born with it o.o I don't feel like I can ever get a "unique" voice =X Thanks for the comments ^ ^

QUOTE (Krazim @ Mar 25 2008, 03:13 PM) *
Omigoodness, I love your voice. And your song samples are very nice. I really want to hear 'em someday in the future~! ^-^;;


Thanks! although I probably won't ever have th courage to record any of them xD
funkymonkynancy
I love you!!! can I be a fan???

I had some questions

what do you use to create your harmonies? garageband? I love your harmonies. They are so greatly matched


some of the songs were a little clashy though. Like the harmony did not match the song.

I didn't like the can't a girl just have fun or whatever. The one with all the cuss words in it lol
some of the words were off beat. You know when a poem is off beat?
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