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iEatPhoxD
Something I found on the internet a while ago. If you don't find this sad, then you have no heart mellow.gif jk.
I'm not sure if this is the right section, or posted before. enjoy the poem
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I stared at the girl next to me...She was my so called "best friend"... I stared at her... short, silky hair... And I wished she was mine... But she didn't notice me like that... I knew it... After class she walked up to me and asked me to hang out today..... I said yeah she And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I want her to know that I don't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm too shy to tell her... And I don't know why...
IT'S JUNIOR YEAR...


My phone rang... On the other end it was her... She was in tears... Mumbling on and on about how her love had broken her heart... She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone... So I did... As I sat next to her on the sofa... I stared at her soft eyes... Wishing she was mine... After 2 hours... A Drew Barrymore movie... And 3 bags of chips... She decided to go to sleep... She looked at me... Said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I want her to know... That I don't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm too shy to tell her... And I don't know why...
IT'S SENIOR YEAR...


The day before prom... She walked to my locker... "My date is sick" she said... He's not going to go... Well... I didn't have a date and in 7th grade... We made a promise that if neither of we had dates... We'd go together just as "best friends"... And so we did...
IT'S PROM NIGHT...


After everything was over with... I was standing at her front door step... I stared at her ... She smiled at me... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me like that... And I know it... Then she said "I had the best time... Thanks!"... And she gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I wanted her to know that I don't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why...
IT'S GRADUATION DAY...


A day passed... And then a week... And then a month... Before I could blink... It was graduation day... I watched her... Perfect body... Floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma... I wanted her to be mine... But she doesn't think of me that way... And I know it... Before everyone went home... She came to me in her smock and hat... And cried as I hugged her... Then she lifted her head from my shoulders and said "you're my best friend"... "Thanks!"... And gave me a kiss on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I wanted to know that I wanted to be more than "just friends"... I love her but I'm too shy... And I don't know why...
Its A FEW YEARS LATER...


Now I sit in the pews of the church... A church that she is getting married in now... I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life... Married to another man... I wanted her to be mine... But she didn't see me like that... And I knew it... But before she drove away... She came to me and said "You came! Thanks!"... And she kissed me on the cheek... I wanted to tell her... I wanted her to know that I didn't want to be "just friends"... I love her but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why...
YEARS PASSED...



I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend"... At the service they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years... This is what it said... "I stare at him... Wishing he was mine... But he doesn't notice me like that... And I know it... I wanted to tell him... I wanted him to know... That I don't want to be "just friends"... I love him but I'm just too shy... And I don't know why... I wish he would tell me he loved me"... I wish I did too... I thought to myself and I cried...
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tell me what you think . oh and this one part, the second paragraph where the girl was crying because her "love" broke her heart? Do you think it was a different guy or when she said love, did she mean "him", the main character of this poem. Girl was upset because he doesn't realize that she loves her, and thinks the guy doesn't like her, etc. I dunno maybe i'm thinking about it too much blink.gif
purple_orchid
Aaaah! So cute! My friend once told me this story, but she was only making a summary. It's good to read the whole story. I think when she said her love, she meant her best friend.
StridingCloud
oh my god, its just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad, it feels too real to me sad.gif lol oh well, great lesson though biggrin.gif
alainachen_604
OMG thats soo fricken sad tears.gif
awww~ they were both shy and wanted eachother..
but the girl in the first place should'nt have been like
thanks bestfriend! blah blah blah lol but still sad.gif
awww thats very very very sad!
simplicity90
oh i read this before i think it was also on soompi. but it's sad everytime tears.gif
kaffyx3
aww thats so sad!
he should of just told her before it was too late.
but its sad that in the end they both didnt had to the heart to tell each other
omgsh that soo sad!
oh wells
thnks for sharing! x)
cannedpeaches
thts so heartbreaking!!!!
ichunsah
aww i read this a while ago. its so sad..
that guys like me ohmy.gif
except im 100% sure my friends dont like me >.> even though i wish they did..
i<3bigbang
oh my goshh i was a little sad before i came here and when i read this my eyes started getting watery tears.gif
tramy
=( so sad. go conffess to the people you like now everyone!!
JJM
Proves to show what happens if you keep your true feelings bottled up inside forever.
Louise89
TOT sad....
They're both dumb if you ask me!!!
they should've been together.
thanks for sharin
blue_wishesx3
=/ thats so sad
they both liked each other but they were just too shy tears.gif
i guess this should inspire people to tell the person they like...
that they like them before it's too late .
7stars soliloquy
On the pessimistic side, her love for him is never truly verified. She could have been in love with another one of her friends. Just because her words echoed his it doesn't prove anything.

Depressing story, though.
SilentSpectre
^ you always expect the worst. dry.gif
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